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Chapter 2 — The General Walked In Before They Could Take Her Away

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“She has permission because she owns the property,” Margaret said.

“And the papers?”

“Copies of her own trust documents.”

Brad pointed at me.

“She broke into the office.”

“The door was open,” I said.

Those were the first words I had spoken since the police arrived.

Brad’s face tightened.

“She threatened us.

Ask them.”

He swept his hand toward my parents.

My father looked at the floor.

My mother’s lips parted, but nothing came out.

Tiffany stepped in front of them.

“She was aggressive.

She came here in uniform to intimidate everyone.”

Officer Ramirez glanced at the videos still recording around the room.

“This party appears to have been filmed from several angles,” he said.

“That should make the question easy to settle.”

Tiffany’s hand closed around her phone.

The county fraud investigator, Detective Lena Ortiz, held out her palm.

“Do not delete anything.”

“You cannot take my phone.”

“Not without a warrant,” Ortiz agreed.

“But destroying evidence after being instructed to preserve it creates a separate problem.”

Tiffany slowly placed the phone on the table.

Her livestream continued to capture every word.

The comments were moving too quickly to read.

Brad tried another route.

“Fine.

Maybe the trust exists.

We were told it had been abandoned.

Leah has not lived here in years.

There are adverse-possession rules.

There are family-use exceptions.”

Margaret did not blink.

“You are a licensed real estate broker.

You know neither claim applies.”

Brad’s confidence faltered.

“I am not a lawyer.”

“Yet you prepared a deed, attached a notarized signature and submitted it for recording.”

Detective Ortiz removed a transparent evidence sleeve from her case.

Inside was a copy of the transfer document Brad had filed that morning.

My name appeared at the bottom.

The signature looked convincing from a distance.

Up close, the loops were too careful.

Whoever had copied it had drawn each letter instead of writing it.

General Cole placed another sheet beside it.

“This is Major Bennett’s verified signature from her federal security records,” he said.

“Obtained with her written authorization.”

The difference was obvious.

My real signature tilted forward.

The forgery leaned backward.

Officer Ramirez flipped the transfer over and examined the notary stamp.

“This commission expired eighteen months ago.”

Brad looked toward the back door.